Howdy Folks.
Rick wrote back to me the other day. I was a bit apprehensive, it'd been two months since I wrote to him to say that I used his poem 'Burning the Meadows' as a metaphor within a new song.
A meta-metaphor if you will.
Ricks creative generosity is such that he approved of being 'sampled'. Thank you Rick. Wow. No really. Thank you. It's a beautiful piece of work and it seemed to say what was in my head.
For me, this is a complex concept. I didn't quote his poem, I condensed my own interpretation / rephrasing of the meaning of the poem into 2 lines. Ouch. Then added my own stuff to it to talk about the subject of the song, for which his poem, or the gist of it, became my new metaphor.
Far out.
It begs the question, at what point is it Sampling, at what point is it influence?
I sent what I'd written and asked if he was cool with it. he was. I'm stoked.
I'm kind of reminded of the two versions of Ozymandias. If Googling serves me correctly, Shelley and his mate Horace Smith had a comp going to work on poems about the same subject. It begat two quite different but similar poems.

Shelley:
I met a traveller from an antique land,
Who said—“Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;
And on the pedestal, these words appear:
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.”
and Smith:
IN Egypt's sandy silence, all alone,
Stands a gigantic Leg, which far off throws
The only shadow that the Desart knows:—
"I am great OZYMANDIAS," saith the stone,
"The King of Kings; this mighty City shows
"The wonders of my hand."— The City's gone,—
Nought but the Leg remaining to disclose
The site of this forgotten Babylon.
We wonder,—and some Hunter may express
Wonder like ours, when thro' the wilderness
Where London stood, holding the Wolf in chace,
He meets some fragment huge, and stops to guess
What powerful but unrecorded race
Once dwelt in that annihilated place.
I like the Shelley version but...anyway. BTW I am totally going to try writing a hard core heavy metal song with that Shelly poem. It's dying for something Bonkers. Just see if I don't :-)
Anyway...Back to...
Thoughts On Band Creative Process.
I had a chorus, I was looking for a way to talk about a very difficult and personal song subject. Yeah I know, we can't write all our songs about space monsters and genetically modified cows. Well...now that I think about it...

Space Cow.
I digress.
So there I was, at a band get together, trying to show the guys this fragment of an idea, grasping at how to approach this song concept.
Mr Wizard very wisely told me to pay attention to even fragmentary ideas.
Bill found something for it and I could fit the Chorus. Mr Wizard found a space in it. Great. Melody? Check. Emotional content versus sonic 'feel'? Check.
Good to go.
Now for the verses. Make wit' da woids, kid.
I had nothing.
So, taking some inspiration from a story about Phillip K Dick using the I-Ching when writing 'man in the high castle' (meta reference, the characters also used the i-ching), I went in search of something to do the same thing with.
Fortunately for me, Ricks book 'Bell 8' was on my worktable. I picked it up, random'ed open a page and blow me down, his poem seemed to say all the stuff I was thinking. or was it?
I'm sure he had some pretty specific stuff in mind when he wrote it, but it seemed amenable to my misinterpretation.
But there are some constraints in Lyric Land that Poets Don't have.

Now don't be down on Rhyming. It's not obligatory but it's Mnemonic.
Also: Space. We don't have much.
This isn't the first run in between poetry and our stuff. 'Country Radio' describes the scene of a long haul trucker reading Robert Frost and ruminating on Country Music (LOL) and 'The Flood' is heavily influenced by the worlds described by Banjo Patterson and Dorothea McKellar. Arguably, that's 'Influence'
In this case, I started by compressing the two stanzas of Rick's poem into 2 lines. Also, during the transliteration process I got the last word wrong and realised I liked it more because it was a freudian slip. It better expressed what I meant. At that point I'd gone way off script. Yikes.
But also, to tie it back into the pre existing chorus, close the loop and make sense of it all, I added More Words. Oh dear. So what is this beast? A quote? an Influence? An interpretation?
I haven't asked yet, whether Rick's intent or concept was the same as mine. I'm curious but afraid to ask. Heh.
I think Rick's right. It is both new and old, it is a 'sample'.
I wonder if he meant what I mean. Maybe I'll pluck up the courage to ask.
The only thing I can do to better allow you to form an opinion is to show both Ricks excellent poem and Teh-Thing-I-Did-With-Ricks-Excellent-Poem and stuff I wanted to say.
'Burning the Meadows' (C) Rick Lyons
You know these flames the way you know a face
and that's the surprise now,
not the flames, not the face, but the reappearance.
There's a fire on the meadows at the far end of the night,
so far that the flames seem like a memory,
like something further back, flaring up again,
some winter night, some fall night,
beyond cove and marsh, in another wind.
And then the waves of flame are through.
Maybe there's something wrong with us, some small thing,
which might surge up like fire,
leaving next to nothing of the life that was -
a cleansing fire, sometimes.
Maybe there's something we can do to keep it from happening,
something we can do once it does.
Maybe there's nothing we can do.
With us, I mean, my friend,
of whom you'd always warned me.
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'Let me go down easy' (Me)
Until it fades like a memory
There's a fire in the memory
of the far end of the night
Flames across the meadows
like a face you can't reprise
When vanity at last deserts you
find at last that nothing hurts you
but I can see it written in your eyes
let me go down easy
let me go down free.
Maybe something's wrong with us
some immortal kink
that surges, cleansing, leaving nothing
of the life that's been.
But I still feel you walk beside me,
skipping over ocean's boundary,
Tiny hand, the firm rough hand within.
let me go down easy
let me go down free.
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